I think in hindsight my design was too confusing. The elements themselves were effective, but when put together I think they made the design too busy, and some of the feedback I received said that the [windowsill] text simply wasn't needed. I feel this was because of my habit to work with type. I feel as if without type, my work isn't complete (even if this isn't true.) This is clearly something I need to work on in the future.
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